elective a: fourth round

by raymanookian

I had to take on board some valid comments regarding the last round of proofs. As much as I really liked them as concepts, and as much I am loathed to admit it, they were far too abstract and didn’t meet the criteria of the original brief. Too conceptual for mother 🙂

With this taken on board, I have incorporated some of the tagging into my original preferred idea. Some alignment issues need to be sorted before going to print, but I now consider this the finished article.